I'm in the middle of trying to write a J2 fic for next year's Big Bang. I'm halfway through at around 11,000 words.
What I really want is more of an opinion on the readability of what I've written so far. If it's a story which can be interesting.
I'm not so much focused on the grammar for the moment as there's still plenty of time.
If someone can help me out, I'd be very grateful.
Thank you in advance.